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46 billion light years to the middle, and then 92 billion on the other side too.
The sphere was getting unbearably huge.
During the millennia, he had become - well, not contented, but resigned at least, to his situation, when suddenly, the dome had expanded, become spherical. He hadn't been prepared, and had almost dropped it, the rounded sides slipping in his hands.
When he squinted through it, he saw the world had changed. It was no longer floating on the sea, but rather, the sea was encompassing a green globe, resting in the center. The stars on the sphere twinkled and poked out from the dark matter, occasionally outshone by the sun as it passed underneath them on its journey around this new body.
With a sigh, he placed his hands a little wider apart, steadying the new world above him.
Another millennium passed by, give or take a couple of centuries, when the sphere grew again. This time he had been somewhat prepared, having followed the little specks on the globe more carefully.
The globe was no longer the center. It was now circling the sun, and a small, intricate system of globes and satellites had joined it in travelling in more or less circular paths inside the sphere.
He pushed the sphere up again, shaking his head lightly in incredulity. Whatever would they think of next? Why couldn't they just have been satisfied with a flat world? Why did they absolutely have to keep poking at the tapestry of reality and come up with new things to explore? New things to investigate? It's not like there were that many of them, anyway, so they had room enough.
After that it went fast. The sphere almost constantly grew larger and larger, and he was struggling, trying to keep up.
Somehow the specks had created an immense universe. The stars had disappeared from the fabric of the sphere and the massive space inside had been filled with suns and globes instead. His arms were trembling and his skin was glistening with sweat as he kept a somewhat uncertain hold on his charge.
This was insane. What did they need all that space for? They barely covered one globe, never mind the billions and billions of globes they had come up with!
If they kept this up, he was going to lose his grip.
The sphere was getting unbearably huge.
During the millennia, he had become - well, not contented, but resigned at least, to his situation, when suddenly, the dome had expanded, become spherical. He hadn't been prepared, and had almost dropped it, the rounded sides slipping in his hands.
When he squinted through it, he saw the world had changed. It was no longer floating on the sea, but rather, the sea was encompassing a green globe, resting in the center. The stars on the sphere twinkled and poked out from the dark matter, occasionally outshone by the sun as it passed underneath them on its journey around this new body.
With a sigh, he placed his hands a little wider apart, steadying the new world above him.
Another millennium passed by, give or take a couple of centuries, when the sphere grew again. This time he had been somewhat prepared, having followed the little specks on the globe more carefully.
The globe was no longer the center. It was now circling the sun, and a small, intricate system of globes and satellites had joined it in travelling in more or less circular paths inside the sphere.
He pushed the sphere up again, shaking his head lightly in incredulity. Whatever would they think of next? Why couldn't they just have been satisfied with a flat world? Why did they absolutely have to keep poking at the tapestry of reality and come up with new things to explore? New things to investigate? It's not like there were that many of them, anyway, so they had room enough.
After that it went fast. The sphere almost constantly grew larger and larger, and he was struggling, trying to keep up.
Somehow the specks had created an immense universe. The stars had disappeared from the fabric of the sphere and the massive space inside had been filled with suns and globes instead. His arms were trembling and his skin was glistening with sweat as he kept a somewhat uncertain hold on his charge.
This was insane. What did they need all that space for? They barely covered one globe, never mind the billions and billions of globes they had come up with!
If they kept this up, he was going to lose his grip.
So this is my first tentative step on my way to a hundred writing prompts.
Had a bit of trouble thinking past What The Water Gave Me, but I finally just started writing, and this sprung into my text processor
I'm following Pencil-Wolf's
Had a bit of trouble thinking past What The Water Gave Me, but I finally just started writing, and this sprung into my text processor
I'm following Pencil-Wolf's
100 Literature Prompts1. Oh poor Atlas
2. Artificial heart
3. Static
4. It's alive and it's beating
5. Hanging bones
6. Fleas
7. Red
8. Leather bound book
9. Flying fish
10. What happened to the colour?
11. Shadow box
12. Pinned wings
13. Cupcake pincushion
14. Paper crane
15. Consciously unconscious
16. Sick
17. Mental midgets
18. Flutter heart, you know you're not free
19. Steampunk boots
20. Grotesque
21. Umbilical cord
22. Collocation
23. Empty metaphors
24. Silver bullets
25. TV Dinners
26. Reverberating
27. Phantasmagoria
28. Reticent
29. Frowzy mousey hair
30. Wicker basket full of water
31. Uninhabited brain
32. pig-sticker
33. Floating archipelagos
34. Pockets full of four leaf clovers
35. Unloved puce
36. Quite unbecoming of you
37. Burn down the bridge
38. Absolution
39. Rememorate
40. Gilded superciliousness
41. Tommy gun ratta-tat-tat
42. Nettle
43. Devil on your back
44. Hymnal of the falling
45. Ghosts and mothballs in the closet
46. Clothes on the floor
47. Cockerel crow
48. Worry Worm
49. K
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I like it, its an interesting take on the Atlas. I think you describe everything quite nicely.